First Love
April 27th, 2008 by seansa_7
First love lies deep
That planted in the deep heart
The root so strong
So can’t pull for everything
No body know why
I too don’t know why
Cause it come to me
When I no yet introduce it
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April 27th, 2008 by seansa_7
First love lies deep
That planted in the deep heart
The root so strong
So can’t pull for everything
No body know why
I too don’t know why
Cause it come to me
When I no yet introduce it
Come on! Do not make English poem for people to read before you are bilingual … and even after being bilingual ….. get your self into reading 1000 english poem than compare it to what are you writing here!
I think “it`s good”
can U teach me to make a poem?